I can see that it looks a lot looser, which is good... but there is something that doesn't look right when he does the little walks... I don't know what it is exactly.
I was looking at the reference and you've copied it really well, I just am not sure making it look exactly like the video transfers well to animation (see: my crappy jump lol).
Maybe if you have him step faster, and harder (so there are longer pauses between steps) and it kind of looks like christopher walken's feet are more sideways and stiff when he steps.
I'm not sure really, just trying to help! Lord knows I need help too haha.
I think this looks really awesome. I love the addition of the loseness - it makes it feel so much more natural to me. I can see what Tanith's saying about that little walking section and I agree with her suggestions, but that's super awesome looking to me. Each time you redo an animation it gets better and better - such dedication! :O
aww it says this is no longer available!
ReplyDeletebut the other one is looking better already!
Oh okay, I can see it now. Stupid Youtube!!
ReplyDeleteI can see that it looks a lot looser, which is good... but there is something that doesn't look right when he does the little walks... I don't know what it is exactly.
I was looking at the reference and you've copied it really well, I just am not sure making it look exactly like the video transfers well to animation (see: my crappy jump lol).
Maybe if you have him step faster, and harder (so there are longer pauses between steps) and it kind of looks like christopher walken's feet are more sideways and stiff when he steps.
I'm not sure really, just trying to help! Lord knows I need help too haha.
I think this looks really awesome. I love the addition of the loseness - it makes it feel so much more natural to me. I can see what Tanith's saying about that little walking section and I agree with her suggestions, but that's super awesome looking to me. Each time you redo an animation it gets better and better - such dedication! :O
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